Homework Writing: Using linking phrases

Homework:
(The First One) Part 5: Write a report on the benefit of walking
Make sure you use 3-5 linking words


EXAMPLE: ON BUILDING A NEW PARK 

Firstly, a new park would be a great boost to Oxford. Since Oxford is a very busy city, people tend to feel stressed and tired after work. Walking in a green and beautiful park will help them feel relaxed.
Of course, a park should have a play area for children, and a café for their mums and dads to chill out in. Surely, for this new park, we could also do something exciting and different like having a zip-wire area or a skateboarding area?


Above all, it will be crucial to raise awareness about the park. For instance, we could put adverts through people’s letterboxes with photos of people having the time of their life in the park. In addition, we could produce a video of the park and see if it goes viral!

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